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What's coming soon!

Thu Nov 5, 2009, 7:04 PM
  • Listening to: Kuttless
  • Reading: Well, nothing. But I'm writing, Remdal!
  • Watching: The Punisher
  • Playing: Halo on multi-player!
  • Eating: Halloween candy!
  • Drinking: Water.
I've been working on a story I've had in my head since forever! I'm on page 40 so far. But I'll be putting in on DA soon. Along with some quick sketches of the characters. So you have a better idea how they all look. I'm really excited about it! And maybe my good friend Zackarra will read, then draw some of my characters. :P

It's called Remdal. It's an action romance, with lots of twists and turns. It's a knights tale, about four men, and their quests, and adventures.
Here's a preview.


A long time ago there was a powerful kingdom called Remdal.
That was in, what it would seem to be, an unending war against
the Tizcash.
Thirty years ago, the people of Remdal had an awful disease.
That no one in Remdal could find a cure for. But the Tizcash people were very intelligent.
They lived in the woods, and found many cures for many different diseases.
So the king of Remdal made a deal with them. If they found a cure for their sickness, they would promise to share their great land with the Tizcash.
They could come and buy, sell, and live with them, and they would never cast them out.
Fourteen years later a great virus struck the Tizcash people.
The virus came from the outcasts, from many different kingdoms.
They were forced to live in the wilderness. With no food, they started to become so starving that they feasted on the rats, each other and drank their own urine.
But it got worse, they started to get this awful virus, that gave them great pain, then numb feeling throughout their whole body. Then what was a numb feeling, became no feeling, which made them go even more mad. They started even eating their own flesh.
The men of Tizcash loved to challenge one another in these big fights.
So every month some of the men would go out in the wilderness, and battle with each other there.
Not knowing the danger.
One day, a group of the savages attacked the men.
Of course the men of Tizcash are very strong, and could easily take armless, starving, week men, like the outcasts. But as they fought, every slice to the sick peoples body, caused their blood to spread. Their blood got on their feet, or weapons, and even some of their skin.
Once the Tizcash men defeated them all, they continued with their battle.
But a few weeks later, the virus started to kick in, and the great worriers lost all their feeling in their body.
The virus had spread too their wives and children already, before they even knew they had it.
The virus had not yet struck the people of Remdal.
So when the king heard about it, he gathered all of his guards.
He broke the promise he had made, and forced out all of the Tizcash people who lived in Remdal, and he shut the gates, so the Tizcash could not enter.
The Tizcash became angry, which made them stronger, and that's how it all started.

That's just the main story behind the war. But there's lots more to this story than just the war. So keep an eye out for my story, Remdal.

Thanks for reading! I hope to hear your ideas, and opinions!

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  • Interests: Writing drawing Working Gaming 4Wheeling Paintballing
  • Favourite movie: Death Race Transformers 1 and 2 All the Harry Potter movies The Iron Giant The Mummy
  • Favourite artist: Zackarra
  • Favourite photographer: Zackarra
  • MP3 player of choice: I have a pink Ipod
  • Favourite game: Left 4 Dead, also Halo 1, 2 and 3. Star Wars Knights Of The Old Republic 1 and 2
  • Favourite cartoon character: Umm, this is a hard one, I like Duck Dodgers, Raven, Itachi, Sasuke, Sakura.
  • Personal Quote: Smile God love's you! He saved and forgave you! Just have faith!

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anger is a gift
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thanks fir faving =)

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I am an omnisexual, queer, multi-emotional so-called-woman without gender identity


anger is a gift
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No prob!

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For God so loved the world, that he gave his one and only son, that who ever believes in him, will not perish, but have everlasting life. JOHN 3:16

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